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发表时间:2020-08-04 14:39 小学四年级有个作文题目是《珍爱生命》,疫情严重的时候,和大家分享这个题目,感觉很沉重。 小学的时候,我们的作文题目有时候也会涉及一些很宏大的题材,比如生命、自然、宇宙。这些题目真的很好,我们应该趁着还没长大,早点思考这些概念。 但这些题目,同学们容易写得很空。 题材宏大,我们落笔还是要从小事着手,从我们看得见的事情着手。 比如写关于环境保护的文章,有些同学会写乱砍树,“森林哭了”;或者不按规定排污,“河流哭了”。 如果你并不了解森林,那么,写这样文章,除了应付作业,并没有什么意义,白白浪费时间。 小区的垃圾分类做得好不好,这也是和环境保护相关的题材啊;超市的购物袋有没有被滥用,家里的旧电器有没有被妥善处理……这些看得到摸得着的,都是可以写的。 除非我们是了解森林或者河流的,否则不要思维固化,好像保护环境,就是保护森林和河流。 我们写作文的时候,不要写没有名字的森林或者河流。如果我们写的森林和河流是没有名字的,就意味着我们在写一个符号化的河流或者森林。 什么叫符号化?就是你写的可以是任何一片森林,也可以不是任何一片森林。 比如,写森林哭了,不如写自己小区花园的树木哭了。如果你知道那树的名字就更好了,比如:“小区花园里的细叶榕哭了。” 我们知道的名词的数量,就是我们认识的世界的宽度。 写《珍爱生命》这篇作文也是一样啊,爱护动物,爱护小草,都是珍爱生命,但我们还是要落实到具体的生命体上。人、动物、植物,都可以。 如果我们面对过出生和死亡,不妨写出来。 是什么事情让我们觉得生命真美好,或者是什么事情让我们觉得生命真脆弱? 比如你养过一只小鸭,后来它死掉了,因为没有经历过生死这样的大事,以前没有体会到过失去的感受。当你失去了小鸭这样一个动物朋友,你可能会认识到,生命是有长度的。单单这一点,就足够让我们去珍视生命了。 再比如,你和你的家人一起经历了这次抗击流感疫情,一定有很多事情让你感触很多。在这件事情中的每一个人,可能都有一个瞬间,在演绎“珍爱生命”的故事。 我们也可以写别人的故事,但我们一定要关心这个人——医生是有名字的,护士也是有名字的,小区送感冒药到你家的快递员,你可能不知道他的名字,但他也是有名字的。 不要写没有主人公的文章。 我们每天都会关心网络上公布的数据,多少人生病,多少人因病去世,那些每个死去的人,都是有名字的啊。 生命就是这么具体的,我们只有感受到这种具体,才会懂得“珍爱”。 In the fourth grade of primary school, there is a composition titled "Cherish Life". When the epidemic is serious, it is very heavy to share this topic with everyone. In primary school, our composition topics sometimes involve some grand subjects, such as life, nature and universe. These topics are really good. We should think about these concepts before we grow up. But these topics are easy for students to write very empty. The subject matter is grand, so we should start from the small things and the things we can see. For example, writing articles about environmental protection, some students will write about cutting down trees, "the forest cried"; Or failing to discharge pollutants as required, "the river cried". If you don't know the forest, writing such an article is meaningless and a waste of time, except for dealing with homework. The garbage classification in the community is well done, which is also a theme related to environmental protection; Whether the shopping bags in the supermarket are abused, whether the old electrical appliances in the home are properly disposed of ... All these things that can be seen and touched can be written. Unless we know about forests or rivers, we should not solidify our thinking, as if protecting the environment means protecting forests and rivers. When we write a composition, don't write about forests or rivers without names. If we write forests and rivers without names, it means we are writing a symbolic river or forest. What is symbolization? That is, what you wrote can be any forest or not. For example, if you write about the forest crying, you might as well write about the trees crying in your garden. It would be even better if you knew the name of the tree, for example, "the banyan tree in the community garden cried." The number of nouns we know is the width of the world we know. The same is true for writing "Cherish Life". Caring for animals and grass is all about cherishing life, but we still need to implement it on specific living bodies. People, animals, plants, all can. If we have faced birth and death, we might as well write it down. What makes us feel that life is really beautiful, or what makes us feel that life is really fragile? For example, you raised a duckling, and then it died, because you have never experienced such a great event as life and death, and you have never experienced the feeling of losing before. When you lose an animal friend like duckling, you may realize that life has a length. This alone is enough for us to cherish life. For another example, you and your family have experienced the fight against influenza, and there must be many things that make you feel a lot. Everyone in this matter may have a moment to interpret the story of "cherishing life". We can also write other people's stories, but we must care about this person-the doctor has a name, the nurse has a name, and the courier who delivers cold medicine to your home in the community may not know his name, but he also has a name. Don't write articles without a hero. Every day, we care about the data published on the Internet, how many people get sick and how many people die because of illness, and those who die all have names. Life is so specific, and only when we feel it can we know how to cherish it. |