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小小动物园

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发表时间:2020-10-16 21:52

我家有三个人,母亲,父亲和我。我们的家就像一个有趣而充满爱心的“动物园”。


我母亲的个性有时像火老虎,有时像温柔的小猫。曾经我渴望玩耍并匆忙完成英语功课,但母亲严厉批评她。她的眉毛紧紧,形成了国王的性格,睁大了眼睛,她对我大喊:“单词写成这样,谁能看得清楚?这些单词拼写错误!只是考虑玩耍,不要写功课好吧,处理事情吧?我吓坏了,急忙说:“不,我以后再做。现在不行了!”我不喜欢她生气的方式,但我知道她也对我有好处。她通常大部分时间都很温柔,照顾我的生活,送我去学校,带我去公园玩耍,生病时照顾我,就像猫妈妈照顾小猫一样。


谈完妈妈,我将再次介绍爸爸。他就像大公牛,因为他每天总是很忙。我通常下班一周只有两三天。我经常加班,直到我迟到。我回到家后,他看上去总是很累。但是,即使他累了,他也会问我关于我的学业,并与我的母亲交谈。一起做一些家务。他不仅要做很多艰苦的工作,而且还为我们的家庭做很多事情。他只是我的超级英雄!但是有时候我也帮爸爸。


最后,让我说说我自己。我就像爬树的猴子。那是因为我喜欢运动。我可以打羽毛球,乒乓球和游泳。我的活动不仅像猴子,而且像猴子一样喜欢吃。我喜欢吃桃子,香蕉,苹果,西瓜……我看起来也像猴子,有两个大耳朵,圆圆的眼睛。我调皮的时候喜欢蹦蹦跳跳。我妈妈总是说:“你这只小猴子,现在停下!”


这是我们的家人。尽管我们的个性和外貌有所不同,但我们的家庭仍然生活在和谐与快乐中。


老师的评价:李同学的这篇文章思路清晰,结构严谨,语言流利生动,再现了一个有趣而又充满爱心的家庭!在这篇文章中,一个人,一个段落,通过人物的语言介绍了爸爸妈妈和他自己,举止和动作描述再现了每个人物的不同特征。这也使我们似乎看到了家庭成员之间彼此相爱的美丽画面。


参考翻译:

There are three people in my family, mother, father and me. Our home is like a fun and loving "zoo".


My mother’s personality is sometimes like a fire tiger, sometimes like a gentle kitten. Once I was eager to play and finished my English homework hastily, but my mother severely criticized her. Her brows were tight, forming a king character, her eyes widened, and she shouted at me: "Word It’s written like this, who can read it clearly? The words are spelled wrong! Just think about playing, don’t write your homework well, and deal with things, right?" I was frightened and hurriedly said: "No, I will do it later Not so anymore! "I don't like the way she gets angry, but I know she is good for me too. She is usually gentle most of the time, taking care of my life, sending me to school, taking me to the park to play, and taking care of me when I am sick, just like a cat mother takes care of a kitten.


After talking about mom, I will introduce dad again. He is like a big bull because he is always busy every day. There are only two or three days in a week when I get off work normally. I often work overtime until I go home late. After I get home, he always looks very tired. But even if he gets tired, he will ask me about my studies and talk to my mother. Do some housework together. Not only does he do a lot of hard work, but he also does a lot of things for our family. He is simply my superhero! But sometimes I also help Dad.


Finally, let me talk about myself. I am like a tree-climbing monkey. That's because I love sports. I can play badminton, table tennis, and swim. Not only do my activities like monkeys, but also the things I like to eat like monkeys. I like to eat peaches, bananas, apples, watermelons... I also look like monkeys, with two big ears and round eyes. I like to bounce around when I am naughty. My mother always says: "You little monkey, stop now!"


This is our family. Although our personality and appearance are different, our family still lives in harmony and joy.


Teacher's comment: This article by classmate Li has clear thinking, rigorous structure, fluent and vivid language, and reproduces an interesting and loving family! In the article, one person, one paragraph, introduces mom, dad and himself, through the language of the characters , Demeanor and action description reproduce the different characteristics of each character. It also makes us seem to see a beautiful picture of mutual love between family members. Great!




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