向日葵

在植物王国里，每一种植物都有它的独特之处。有的缤纷艳丽，华贵高雅；有的香郁逼人，沁人心脾；有的粗壮高大，奇特无比。但无论是哪一种植物，都不如向日葵令我钦佩，它积极阳光、顽强生长。

　　经过了阵阵春风和场场春雨，向日葵长高了几十厘毫米，于是我饱含期待地说：“向日葵先生，你长高了呀！继续加油吧！”它好像听懂了我的话，又冒出了几颗小叶子，可爱极了！

　　春姑娘默默地走了，来让夏哥哥代她管理万物生灵。从远处看，一阵微风吹起，向日葵田像是掀起一场金色的麦浪。向日葵的花瓣随风起舞，发出阵阵清香，沁人心脾。几只小蜜蜂晕头转向，原来你们也陶醉于这香味之中了吗？

　　走近一看，便看到了一棵又粗又长的茎，它直直地挺立着，像是战士一般守卫着这片土地。茎毛茸茸的，还有一些小刺。所以你千万要小心，不要被它扎伤啦！它的叶子又大又宽，像是一把芭蕉扇。它的花盘是圆形的，就像一个小太阳，带来温暖和希望。花瓣是橙色的，像是太阳散发出的金光，明亮而温暖。

　　每天早晨，向日葵都会执着地向太阳问好。“太阳公公你好呀，今天的心情怎么样？”礼貌的问候使阳光更加灿烂了。今天一整天，它都将和太阳公公一同工作，为这片大地带来温暖和希望。

　　向日葵又叫作太阳花，象征着希望。我从向日葵那里学到了乐观、阳光、积极的人生品格。

　　我喜欢向日葵，不仅仅是因为我被向日葵的品格所震撼，我还要学习向日葵不怕风吹雨打的精神，微笑着面对生活！

悦悦老师评：通过阅读你的文章，老师知道你是一个非常认真的小同学。你叙事的能力很好，能将文章写得很流畅。但如果能在细节处多多丰富一下就更好了。希望你在今后的学习生活中，跟着老师多多学习其他手法、词汇。期待你未来有更好的表现，加油！

英语翻译：

In the plant kingdom, every plant has its uniqueness. Some are colorful and gorgeous, luxurious and elegant; some are fragrant and refreshing; some are sturdy and tall, peculiar. But no matter what kind of plant it is, it is not as admirable as the sunflower. It is active in the sun and grows tenaciously.

After gusts of spring breeze and rain, the sunflower grew tens of centimeters taller, so I said with anticipation: "Mr. Sunflower, you have grown taller! Keep going!" It seemed to understand what I said, and again A few small leaves appeared, so cute!

　　Chun girl left silently, and let Brother Xia take charge of all creatures on her behalf. From a distance, a breeze blew, and the sunflower field seemed to set off a golden wheat wave. The petals of sunflowers dance with the wind, giving out bursts of fragrance, refreshing. A few little bees are dizzy, so you are also intoxicated by the scent?

　　 approached and saw a thick and long stem, which stood upright, guarding the land like a warrior. The stems are fluffy and there are some small spines. So you must be careful not to get hurt by it! Its leaves are big and wide, like a banana fan. Its flower disk is round, like a small sun, bringing warmth and hope. The petals are orange, like golden light from the sun, bright and warm.

　　 Every morning, Sunflower will persistently say hello to the sun. "Hello, father-in-law, how are you feeling today?" The polite greeting made the sun brighter. All day today, it will work with Father Sun, bringing warmth and hope to this land.

　　 Sunflower is also called sunflower, which symbolizes hope. I learned optimism, sunshine, and positive life character from Sunflower.

　　 I like sunflowers, not only because I am shocked by the character of sunflowers, but also because I have to learn the sunflower's spirit of not being afraid of wind and rain, and face life with a smile!

Teacher Yueyue's comment: By reading your article, the teacher knows that you are a very serious student. Your narrative skills are very good and you can write essays smoothly. But it would be better if you can enrich the details. I hope you will follow the teacher to learn other techniques and vocabulary in your future study and life. Looking forward to your better performance in the future, come on!